This, especially the first page, is a prime example of what happens if I don't PLAN to make a comic page. The flow is completly all over the place with thtat one. One SHOULD have had Exa look up to Yetta in the first panel, then go to Yetta from a low point of view perspective (exas pov) THEN transision to Yetta's eye level for focus on him for the next page. Also i usually prefer the action to move to the right (moving forward into reading direction), not to the left like on the second page. But i just started to draw Yetta for the fun of it so this ended up as is x) (2/2)